i'm starting to write a story.
above all, i just want criticism.
please keep it constructive, though.
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Preface
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He was a young man.
She was a young woman.
It was the 1940s, and they both liked to swing.
He liked big band jazz and the Chicago White Sox.
She liked fine art and ballet.
They:
 Went to the same school
 Took the same classes
 Rarely spoke – and never to each other.
At the age of 18, he traded in the car his parents had formerly purchased for him – a 1940 Ford Convertible – for a motorcycle. It was a 1936 DKW SB 500 A: a three